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I am very proud of my of my exaggeration poem so I thought I would share it with you.I thought my beat to my eaggeration was very good and the descriptive words about my brother were realy good and perfect words for him.
My little brother,
He is the loudest you have ever seen,
He has tryabites of anger,
And he is always mean.
He has really bad breath,
It smells really really bad,
It could cause someones death,
It makes you really mad!
He always flicks me in the head,
He is always got to be first,
It makes you fell like you want to be dead,
I wish he was cursed!
All and all he is my little brother,
I know I have to live with him,
And so does my mother,
And his nickname is bim!
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This is my first limrick that I would like to share it with you. With doing a limrick you have to have the same rhyme and beat.An I thought I done well in the the beat and ryhme.
There once was a old lady from Eltham,
Who had a very big chin,
It wobbled about,
When she started to shout,
So she popped it with a pin.
WOW!!!
The reason I put this on my blog for my work of the week is because I have paragraphed my story very well and I have a graet conclusion of my argument.
ARUGMENT.
Should children be allowed to have cell phones at school?
YES! Children should be allowed cell phones at school.
Because you can keep in touch with your perants , to say that you get off the bus and your mother or father/caregiverisn’t there, you can just flip open your cell phone text or ring them.
An if an emergency happens eg:You are on lock down at your school you can just text or ring them. An it is a fact that they are a tool for daliy life.
Children rely on it for information even perants. When children get caught it is uasllay their preants texting or calling.Allowing children to have their cell phones at school vioations and confisations have decreased.
Use them during silent reading.An the children btake their cell phones to school at their own risk so, the school won’t be reliable for any stolen or lost cell phones.
Children can text or ring their perants if they have forgotten their events for the day.
An if they don’t want us to text in class we could just hand in our phones in class,and get them back after class.
So thats why the teachers should let us have our cell phones at school.
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For the work of the week i am doing my speech reflection.
Good topic:I think my speech my speech was a good topic because it was something I liked personly.
Good opening:My openind to my speech wasn’t every intersting
Good ending:My ending to my speech wasn’t good because I didn’t really end very good.
Organisation:My organisation was good because I didn’t just jump to a different subjet every sentence.
Experssron in voice:My experssron in my voice is very good even in my reading.
Eye contact:My eye contact is very good because I can remeber my speech very well.
Loud clear voice:I peronly have a loud clear voice.
Speaking slow enough to understand:I talk really fast when I am nervos so I dont know?
Good posture:I dont really have a good posture because I stand leaning to one side.
Fillding or shuffling:I dont really fiddle when i’m nervos.
Pausing for effect:I always oause effect after each card.
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